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All Comments on 'My Mouth Ain't Just for Talkin''

by HansTrimble

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Savanna7Savanna7over 10 years ago
Nice dry humor

Some of your dialogue was very witty and I liked how you poked fun and the humor behind it. If I would suggest anything it would be to tighten up your sentence structure a little more to give the humor more punch. Good Story well told, nice idea too.

texcavemantexcavemanover 10 years ago
AND

her last 2 sentences say it all......

If it ain't broke, don't fix it! Now kiss me.

A_BierceA_Bierceover 6 years ago
'Fess up!

Y'all's name is really Dave Barry, right?

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I'm an engineer, widowed, retired from the aircraft industry and loving every minute of my retirement! It's great being able to do what I want, when I want, the way I want. I've found it very relaxing to sit at the keyboard at night, when everything is quiet, and write wha...