All Comments on 'Lady in The Black Dress'

Better, he meets his wife's long term lesbian lover, at least you get to meet one of the people that she is cheating with, good luck.

Rather sloppy - many errors.

What the hell happened? The wife was leading the woman in black out of the restroom, then what? She kind of disappeared somewhere. And anyway, who cares? Three cardboard characters with no discernible personality and no apparent purpose.

she is doing something for him.

Or get an editor so we, the readers, can understand what's happening. I got lost. Had to rate the story poorly.

Because I'm not sure exactly what happened. Get an editor. This was a mess. And if your wife is inviting someone else into your bedroom (regardless of whether it's a man or woman) throw her out. That kind of lack of communication only leads to disaster. Manipulative bitch.