All Comments on 'Kinky Girl'

Teffific, story could be oh so true. I remember when . . .

Normally I don't give much of a high rating when there is no unplanned pregnancy involved. But this is an exception. Surely incest laws do not apply when the brother is infertile, or the woman is barren? If there is, I'm sure there is no restrictions for brothers and sisters sleeping together in the raw and fucking bareback as "husband and wife".....I loved this one!

In the realm of fantasie, no act or experience can be forbidden - very nice, Scorpio, you had me jacking off before I was half way through your story. My first submission is currently "pending" ... it will appear within the next few days, I hope.

write more of these two

..that total asshole don87654?

I remember having the hots for my cousin and fantasising about her navy blue knickers but imagine the reality of arousing my young brother, wanking his pencil cock as he struggled in joy and as I got nearer I could see the foreskin stretch probably for the first time off his helmet as his first ejaculate emerged in spurts from his tiny slit

You used the word grin way too much. Also, you can't grin a word. You can only say a word, i.e. "I'll go first, " Lucy said, not grinned. Words can't be grinned or laughed... Only said.

...was that you wrote "Lucy" when you meant "Claire." Good story, though. Longer would have been better.

I fully agree with Anonymous, about don87654. Since an asshole has purpose, I will not say he's an asshole-- just what exits an asshole.