All Comments on 'Too Hot!'

by Sean Renaud

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

switching names from stephanie to anne back and forth make the reader lose pace with the story. use a proof reader.

SKCBaitSKCBaitover 10 years ago

Turned him into a useless neutered puppy. Piss poor story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story!

Noticed only 2 negative comments which is a shame cause this is a well written story from start to finish. Nice pacing too. 9/10.

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