All Comments on 'The College Life'

by PassionSoftball

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wow..

this is cool..but it leave me wanting..please tell me there is another part for this..thank you for sharing..

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loved it

Please write more?

PassionSoftballPassionSoftballover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you

There is a 2nd part underway so please stay tuned :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good start

Please get some help with grammar and punctuation. Literotica has a volunteer editor program that can help - it will make your writing easier and more enjoyable to read. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome!!!

OMG this is so awesome this got my pussy so wet,

Please please please do the second part fast!!!

I am constantly checking this story everyday!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amaziiiinng !!!

From the begining I'm Loving Jess.. What she did just so that she be sarah's rommate is so nice and sweet.. And i love how calm she is and how much she cares about sarah..too many calls and texts.. Just sweet story.. Hope it becomes one of the most romantic stories.. And i hope it never goes for Threesom.. That will just ruin the story.. Second part please..

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
i love it

Please write more. I think I'm gonna like jess :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Second part?

Please make a second part. I really like this story and I'm excited to see where it leads.

redskinsfan6969redskinsfan6969about 9 years ago
Great story

Can't wait to read chapter 2

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