All Comments on 'Lustful Hatred'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow

that's.... just wow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
And then....

Jerry comes back into the bedroom with a shotgun, james and the whore are history, end of problem! (result - worth going to prison for)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awful

Terrible story. Not worth the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Bad

This was horrible, both from a moral and I sexual point of view

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Haha

Laughing my head off at shotgun comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Short Review

This story is a bit short with decent writing. Reminiscent of Salo in it's amorality, the difference being that Salo is a masterpiece. Who knows what this is?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh Jesus

There were so many things that were bad about this not sure where to begin. Do you perpetually take it up the ass, or are you a virgin? Because that's the only way that a dick could make someone's stomach bulge... by going through the anal cavity. The vaginal walls, and the cervix don't allow that kind of depth.

I know that you were striving for sadistic... which I appreciate... but this fell short. Sadism is psychological more than anything. Toying with one's emotions, or physically harming them. This was neither. It just came off as kind of mental, and extremely unbelievable even for fiction. Story telling doesn't seem to be a talent of yours.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You're a terrible person. Kill yourself

Just die

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