All Comments on 'Timid Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Is any comment

necessary?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Not Good

Really?Erotic? Screwing a stranger on a car? 1*

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 10 years ago
the story reads as if it is a fantasy

I'd like to read more of him making his wife do things with other men and taking her completely into the life of a submissive.

I'd like to read about him giving his wife to a guy that has a huge cock for the weekend, and with her husband not being there to control the man that's fucking her and she is left to do what this man wants her to do

northlandernorthlanderover 10 years ago
Why

Why in gods name would any husband who professed to care for his wife subject her to this kind of conduct?

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Wrong category

Sweetie is not as much an LW as Hubby is an asshole. This would fit (and rate) better in Reluct/NonConsent.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Crap

No dominant faithful husband would desire his submissive faithful wife to fuck another man. Even in a different category this is crap.

No offense. Keep writing. Just something else.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good up until...

I liked it up until the guy took her at the bar. Before that it was sexy. Its hotter, for me, when it accidental. Like if she was leaning over giving hubby a bj and someone outside of the car copped a feel of her ass through the window, etc

xxeloxxeloover 10 years ago
Good start Bad End

The build up in the restaurant was nice and turning me on.

The end was a total let down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
CRAP

What a load of crap

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
It happen

I did it to my wife, now once a month she once to keep doing it.

Grant66Grant66over 5 years ago
I hope you continue

Your story reminded me of the night I convinced my wife to remove her bra in a restaurant restroom. Her blouse was completely transparent so when she exited the ladies' room, looking somewhat embarrassed, her breasts were completely visible through her sheer blouse. Several guys checked her out. As we were eating I could clearly see her rock-hard, erect aroused nipples, and so could anyone else.

I hope you continue this story line.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Utter bullshit

The wife is always timid, shy, innocent, and faithful, but gives in and cucks another man.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

It amazes me how many authors on this site hate women and want to degrade them by having the characters fuck kitchen help or groundskeepers against their will.

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