by averagewifey
and original! The interplay between hubby and wife is fun, exciting , and dangerous. MORE! .
Definitely your best work yet. Keep writing. Very creative story.
...to a good, creative story but not enough to be a complete, stand alone story. Keep writing, though. It has very good potential.
I read your bio and you wrote that you wanted to write snippets. That's what this is, but it could be developed into a pretty good story. Give it a try. I'll read some of your other stories, too, based on the quality of this one.
26th NC, … and yet you keep reading.
Do you know how ridiculous that sounds ? Own up to your fetish. It’s very freeing.