All Comments on 'Average Wifey Files #11'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Brilliant

and original! The interplay between hubby and wife is fun, exciting , and dangerous. MORE! .

Tx Tall TalesTx Tall Talesover 10 years ago
Congratulations!

Definitely your best work yet. Keep writing. Very creative story.

x_witless_xx_witless_xover 10 years ago
Fuck. Terrific little tale.

Are all your stories like this? 5*

ThomasLordThomasLordover 10 years ago
Nice start...

...to a good, creative story but not enough to be a complete, stand alone story. Keep writing, though. It has very good potential.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Pretty darn good

I read your bio and you wrote that you wanted to write snippets. That's what this is, but it could be developed into a pretty good story. Give it a try. I'll read some of your other stories, too, based on the quality of this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great twist to the often routine story. Can't wait to hear more.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Average

Another one from the averagewhore files. Trash is as trash does.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

26th NC, … and yet you keep reading.

Do you know how ridiculous that sounds ? Own up to your fetish. It’s very freeing.

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