All Comments on 'Rusted Chain'

Very deep, strikes me as a piece about love and commitment, perhaps familial?

Is their albatross

What depth of emotion : excellence in verse !

and express the emotions strong. the idea of a rusted chain adds weight, strength and corrosion to the piece, which is reflected within

......and moving. You convey your situation and the emotions it brings well. Love heals if we let it.

My sweet, sweet friend; In the eyes of "them", they would never see you as a rusted chain. You are brilliant! And, I think you have a great sense of humor and even when you are "dark" you are still my light! *heartya! *

and not let them arise on their own, TK U MLJ LV NV