All Comments on 'Apple Pie'

by Ashson

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cosimo14cosimo14over 10 years ago
Master at Story Telling

You are a master at this I truly love your stories. Please keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hmm. Indeed.

haha. I loved the interplay between the man and woman. I loved how concise and thought out the story was, many authors don't do so.

On the other hand Im inclined to agree with the other Anon, Cosmo sounds like an idiot, don't let his accolades go to your head Ashson, even if you may deserve them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Another lovely story in a long line.

Well written, and engaging. We love the interplay, and thank you.

unicorn64unicorn64over 10 years ago

Again an unfinished story. Waiting for chapter 2 .

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
apple pie? BS!

she gave him a tasty slice of hair pie, part of her inhairitance, i'm sure. may she'll return for him to core her after he skins her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
IQ dropping

A stupid story with incredibly stupid characters. It was also very poor wank material

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good stuff

Love the story and how slowly the reveal of her clothes were built UP. And the rest of the day before the game is on!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Gushing

My pussy is gushing over this one...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Anonymous

I need a neighbor like this

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