All Comments on 'On the Beach Alone'

I liked, but it could stand to be longer. Not one of those that drones on and on for no real point, but could stand a bit fleshing out.

Very sexy fantasy and setting, well described and very erotic. The characterisation was also entertaining and well written, which the made the whole thing more authentic for me. I could almost feel the sun on my white bits as I read it ;o)