All Comments on 'Hearts Belong'

"Logic plays no part/when hearts belong" my favorite line, really connects with me.

I didn't like the lover. He should never leave her. He should stay and marry her and keep her safe and protected and in his arms. I know reality is what it is. But I know I want the lover to stay. Great write, Mamaval. Keep going. Little more rhythm would be nice. But overall this poem RAWKED!