All Comments on 'I Love the Smell of Gunpowder in the Morning'

not much sex in your tale but that is ok the swingers were put down before they

got started . a hint of low life coming to the tale. maybe a little dull for the beat off

people. sorry but I do not think this will be rated very high by the people who

read stories on this site not a bad tale just not sexy enough for readers here.

I read this to accompany your latest -

Kinda, sorta, tongue in cheek, you think?

And, quite the twist at the end.

Which makes it difficult to put into any context.

Anyway - better, if less engaging in an odd way.

Green-something

...of the narrator. The mild expletives mixed with the big words made for a fun read. (You commented on a story of mine in March. Sorry for the delay in returning the favor!)