All Comments on 'Norman Rockwell night'

by LesseloovesPeter

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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
awwwww

almost too cute considering lol, nice one Lessie.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago

I have to disagree Todski, I remember happy dinners when my boys were young with my wife and I enjoying them while giving each other the look, anticipating...

Lesse you always seem to have at least one line that lingers for me - "no sigh left unreturned"

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
no inch of skin left unconquered .......

solid , killer line !!!

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
I think we

saw the same thing oldbear

I should have been more specific

My comment was intended more for the ending lines

until both satisfied

in body

in spirit

in soul

fall asleep, hand in hand

this is a cute ending.

what was written between the lines of this poem for me was a whole lot of sexual tension, building with flirty glances, and naughty secret touches, there is a simmering bubbling passion below the surface.

but if I am wrong please feel free to correct me

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
COULD LIFE EVER AGAIN BE SO UN-COMPLICATED

or will it ever happen again in our lifetimes, TK U MLJ LV NV

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Nailed it, Todski

"what was written between the lines of this poem for me was a whole lot of sexual tension, building with flirty glances, and naughty secret touches, there is a simmering bubbling passion below the surface."

Yep - you nailed it.

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