by LesseloovesPeter
I have to disagree Todski, I remember happy dinners when my boys were young with my wife and I enjoying them while giving each other the look, anticipating...
Lesse you always seem to have at least one line that lingers for me - "no sigh left unreturned"
saw the same thing oldbear
I should have been more specific
My comment was intended more for the ending lines
until both satisfied
in body
in spirit
in soul
fall asleep, hand in hand
this is a cute ending.
what was written between the lines of this poem for me was a whole lot of sexual tension, building with flirty glances, and naughty secret touches, there is a simmering bubbling passion below the surface.
but if I am wrong please feel free to correct me
or will it ever happen again in our lifetimes, TK U MLJ LV NV
"what was written between the lines of this poem for me was a whole lot of sexual tension, building with flirty glances, and naughty secret touches, there is a simmering bubbling passion below the surface."
Yep - you nailed it.