by theoncomingstorm
writing a lot of amazing work, glad you have graced us with your work :-)
I think this line
"You're the only one who knows I'm here"
might read better as
"You alone know I'm here"
as it is a closer syllable count to you preceding B line that you rhyme Just my 2 cents on what is another great poem of yours :-)
I like this one, really connects to that piece in me that fears the worst of myself.