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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
you are

writing a lot of amazing work, glad you have graced us with your work :-)

I think this line

"You're the only one who knows I'm here"

might read better as

"You alone know I'm here"

as it is a closer syllable count to you preceding B line that you rhyme Just my 2 cents on what is another great poem of yours :-)

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

I like this one, really connects to that piece in me that fears the worst of myself.

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