All Comments on 'Nella's Story'

Welcome and I look forward to part two

But kinda sad. Hopefully they get rescued (especially since you mentioned that they had people who would notice/care about their disappearance) or at the very least, reunited.

But it does seem like a good start so far.

Potential is the best I can say at this point. Good writer, but a short segment, so who knows. Keep it going for sure.