All Comments on 'Two Sides Ch. 02'

by dlane_1982

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Really

You told the same story and only changed the names. What's up with that?6

1789317893over 10 years ago
not bad

I like it, but don't end them at the same location. overlap them like bricks....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ah duh anonymous

Did anonymous not realize the title of the story explains the similarities. Its from their diffrent perspectives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Finish the story

Great beginning; you need to finish the story or at least add another chapter!!!!

davi3hodavi3hoalmost 8 years ago
What's next???

Great start liked how you did two perspectives, but where's the next chapters.

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