from one to sixty read every word. the very best. you sound as you may have problems. Hope you solve them and that you will continus with your great stories
by
Anonymous02/14/04
I loved every word
I've never cum so many times in 2 days ever in my life, your words are like magic pulling me into the story. Thank You
thank you so much..... i have really screwed up my R/L in the office by reading your story from beginning to end over a couple of days... and thank you .... one of the most beautiful and believable stories i have read on Lit, I do hope that your work won't keep you from writing again too much longer for purely my own selfish reasons. A loving delight... now whatever happens to Carly and Beth and Jimmy?? ;)
by
Anonymous08/09/04
Oh. My. God!
You sir, are an erotica God.
You do Kinky beyond Kink, Loving beyond Love and you do it well.
Thank You
Whew
by
Anonymous12/01/04
Great!
You are a wonderful writer and I hope you continue to write. Your stories are erotic and captivating and they continue to turn me on. Good Job! And keep writing!
by
Anonymous02/09/05
By far the best
Wow wow and more wow's. Excellent, incredibly hot writing that I will be reading and rereading for as long as it stays available. I think I will print it....
Thank you for such a wonderfully erotic and sensual story.
by
Anonymous04/28/05
Fantastic!
Your story is the best ever written. Every coupling is a very erotic, entirely new experience. The story is intelligent with good sentence structure. Thank you.
by
Anonymous05/18/05
A Almost Perfect Awakening All Chapters
With r/l stuff it has taken me a bit of time to read this "book"...Thank You so much for leaving your fans with a actual ending persay instead of hanging like so many of the stories do, Wonderfully written,erotic and oh so sensual...I will continue to read on the rest of your submissions and would love to see you open up into some real bdsm writing if that at all interests you...so many stories in bdsm is left with a unfinished ending and it gets rather flustering. I look forward to reading on as well as searching some new stuff...if you ever publish please post to your bio so us, your fans, can purchase your art...love it love love it...a fan in Texas
by
Anonymous05/29/05
Excellent
For a change, Incest dealt with in a heart-warming manner. Romance, sex, and erotica in a two family setting. Well worth the time to read it.
Stryder
by
Anonymous06/17/05
Nice Very Nice!!
I have read all of your chapters and I must say that they have turned me on more that anyother. Incest never really turned me on but now i wish i had a brother!
by
Anonymous07/26/05
romantic, and adventurous[good stuff].
This whole story, from first to last, was extraordinarily well written. I enjoyed it greatly.
by
Anonymous08/12/05
mazing Writer
You, good sir are an amazing writer. i've read all the chapters and i was very impressed i'm also vey glad that u didn't leave me hanging with the lynn-larry situation, i was beginning to wonder if they'd ever tie the knot. anyway, once again, ur story was awesome
by
Anonymous08/25/05
Perfection
Without a doubt you have a unique talent and until you walk
this way again - THANK YOU!
Took me a couple of days, but the deed is done. All in all alot of goddamn fun! 17(?) catagories of every kind of sex imaginable. Just amazing. Sixty-one chapters, of hot, wet, sweatin', humping, uninhibited debauchery, ending finally with the only emotion that really matters...love. Thanks.
by
Anonymous11/09/05
WOW
Wow I must say I enjoyed reading every single chapter it took a while but I can't be any happier continue writing I can't wait to read more
by
Anonymous01/02/06
Brilliant
That has to be the best story i've read on this site.
Hopefully your long break will be over soon, I can't wait to read what happens to the rest of the charectars and I'm sure neither can many others.
by
Anonymous03/19/06
WOW
That was a brilliant effort keep it up if you can otherwise also thanks for the whole lot you have given.
It would be nice if you can pick up th story say two years down the road and maybe expand the character list as the core group is now comfortable with each other so maybe some unwary new characters can be surprised and added.
by
Anonymous06/04/06
You've heard it before.
Dear Wm
I have read and re read your work. I am amazed at your ability to write the way I love to read. The way my minds eye pictures your illiterations. It took me a few days to read and a few more to re read which means you slayed over this work. I feel full and know you must be exhausted.
I devoured your work to the fullest and understand if you don't work on this any more. But if you do I want to enjoy the read as much as this time.
by
Anonymous06/27/06
WOW!!!!!!!!
What a saga. I truly enjoy your writng style. In addition to great sexual descriptions, there is a great deal of loving emotion. I enjoy that. I really enjoy the incest stories and I don't really understand why. I grew up with three beautiful, younger sisters and have two beautiful daughters and have never had a conscise[sp] incestuos thought. I don't think it totally wrong as long as it is consentual and handled properly. At any rate I really enjoyed your story. Thanks and I will read more. I am clicking on anonymous because I can't get it to go using my
email and password-sorry.
by
Anonymous08/21/06
can't wait
I can't wait to see if you contiue your saga.
by
Anonymous12/27/06
Boo Hoo
Can't wait for more. Great writing.
by
Anonymous02/02/07
WOW!!
I read all 61 chapters and I must say FABULOUS and BRILLANT!! I was just so into the story that I felt like I was there...Excellent writing and the whole story just flowed and it was a very sexy storyline....Can't wait to read more of your work!!
by
Anonymous07/27/07
WOW
With out doubt the best series I have ever read. Great work developing the characters and great insight into how the woman feels. Amazing work, thank you
by
Anonymous08/06/07
Phew
This was a superb read - even the chapters that were not by scene held me interested.
Any hope of a further 61 chapters?
Congratulations on a very explicit but well written yarn. I only wish that I could have held as many productive erections in a day as these guys did!!!
by
Anonymous08/21/07
AWAITING ... MORE!!!
I can only wish that I could put into words, the thoughts and feelings, that you have put into your writings. If you are bored with the story, get your head out of your ass and write more anyway.
I have never read such a wonderful story with all the love, need, desire and feeling of REAL country life before, so "PLEASE" keep up the "GREAT" work and let us have several more chapters! You are an EXCEPTIONAL Writer!!!
DAN
by
Anonymous04/21/08
Horny old bastard loves your story
Great story. Want to see the movie when it cums out I had a woody most of the two days it took me to read it. Thats a big deal because I'm 74 years old. Thanks for all the work you did writing it. All us perv's are grateful for your erotic mind.
by
Anonymous07/05/08
A MUST READ
This CAN'T be the end. I impatiently wait with baited breath (and throbbing cock!) for the next installment. This is the best "novel" I have ever read! Talk about a "page-turner"! I've found a new favorite author! You obviously have a talent for writing, and if you ever had any doubts, let them end here. Not only was this the sexiest thing I've ever read, it was also funny, mildly suspenseful, and extremely well told. With the help of a good proofreader (for grammar and spelling ONLY), you could, I'm positively sure, become a best selling writer in any genre in which you choose to enter. Tom Clancy and John Grisham look out! You've got some serious competition coming I fear. (Hell, even the dialogue was good!)
by
Anonymous09/16/08
So glad I took the time to read all the chapters
I've been reading stories from this website for a few years now, saw various chapters of this story in several categories but I never got around to reading it because I knew I'd want to read it all and that seemed far too complicated and time consuming. I am so glad that I finally gave in and gave it a chance! After 4 years I'm guessing that this story is not getting any new chapters, that's too bad but I loved every single chapter. Thank you for sharing it with us! ~ daisy
by
Anonymous10/14/08
omg
omg dude your story rocked i came so many time over this story ive read all the chaptors and this is the best story ive ever read
by
Anonymous12/10/08
pretty hot...
Having read all the chapters, this was the hottest story I've ever read. However, I feel like there is more to be told. Is there? Do we get to see what happens to Jimmy, Beth, and Carly? What about the blossoming relationship between Betty and Wayne? And, what of the "small-town gossip mill"; any ideas as to maybe getting a chapter in about someone seeing something or hearing something involving one or more of the characters? I have to say also that the main relationship between Larry and Lynn while very sexual, was also very touching too. I like that they are engaged to be married. Perhaps there could be some other "encounters" at the wedding? Anyway, good story!
by
Anonymous12/27/08
totally amazing
Not sure why I was drawn to your text as I'm not into incest etc - but it was just so mind blowingly amazing. I just couldn't stop reading - it was so orgasmic. Thank you
by
Anonymous12/29/08
My god
I came ALOT to this fantastic novel. Superb.
I hope there will be more.
by
Anonymous03/04/09
impressed and aroused
Dear Wm,
This is a fabulous story.Complex plot and characters, hot sex and lots of naughty. Goodness gracious! What an epic. I will check out your other work etc but thanks for a moist and sleepless night! I simply could not stop reading it. THanks for the effort and the tremendous quality of your story. I am in your debt. Please keep up the good work. I am now a huge fan.
by
Anonymous04/19/09
Oh my word!
Oh my word!! I have not been able to concentrait on anything but your stories since i found them, i have never been so much aroused from just reading! Oh! Thank you very much!!
by
Anonymous05/05/09
AMAZING STORY
First off, let me just say that this was an amazing story and I have read the full version three times. Am curious as to whether this story is based on true events. And, as the other commenters have said... AWAITING MORE.
by
Anonymous05/22/09
I would have reread this but...
Hi,
I would have reread this but, I still remember too much about what happens next. I'll wait a while longer and come back again.
As a positive statement, what more can I say?
-- srgeek --
by
Anonymous05/31/09
Truly amazing
A truly amazing story
by
Anonymous07/24/09
great. just great
I read through this in about a month, and, I've gotta say, it was really good. I've been looking for something this long and with such quality after this, but to no avail. There were even parts where the emotional connections made me squirm. Although the ending was pretty predictable (from Wayne on), it made for an amazing novel altogether.
by
Anonymous09/20/09
amazing work!
i've read the entire series in a about two weeks. this is amazing work. the detail and use of imagery is wonderful. this is the most fun i've had reading in years.
by
Anonymous10/18/09
loved it
I have read this story too many times to count, and i still have amazing reactions to it. Love it, and by far one of the best stories ever.
by
Anonymous11/17/09
Holy WOW!
I'm an avid reader of every thing i can get my hands on but it's been many many years since any genera held me so captivated as this did, i finished this thing in under 3 hours and have visited it again 11 times in the last 2 week.
The details are amazingly vivid, your characters are well developed with very lovable personality's, your story line is while maybe a little unlikely still very very believable.
You sir are a fantastic writer and if the rest of your works are as amazing as this one have very very bright future ahead of you, i would easily pay full book price for this work!
in short
[I really love this story.] Yeah, me to brain.
by
Anonymous01/16/10
wow
i have read this whole story over the past month and loved it! it made me come harder than ever before
by
Anonymous01/31/10
WOW i really loved this
I once thought that the incest thing was just that but now i have a newfound understanding of how it all works. I have read all of your chapters from 1 -61 and thoroughly enjoyed evey word of it. Keep up the good work I love your writings. When will you be adding to this wonderful adventure?
Thank you for writing this story! I have done little else during the past 4 or 5 days other than reading it. Although clearly written to emphasize sexual situations, this story also describes people with just enough realism to allow me to buy into it. The last few chapters even created a satisfying ending, and I finished the story feeling happy and satisfied about the fates of all characters.
I see that all your stories were written eight years ago in 2002. I take that to mean that you experienced a life change at the end of this rather intense writing period so that now you are putting your creativity to use in some other way. I respect this decision, but I also want to indicate that if you should elect to return to writing erotica for this web site, there will probably be a whole lot of people besides just me who will be very happy to read it! In any case, I feel fortunate to have experienced much of the product during your Literotica phase, and I thank you for making it possible!
You did it. You wrote a well integrated story that hit practically every popular category and kept me going as quickly as I could move through the stories. Oh, and I'm hot as hell! Great characters, nice development, almost believable plots and I'd love to have my wife and I pulled into these kinds of sexual circumstances by the girls and the guys and Dad and Mom. Thanks again for putting together such a great series.
by
Anonymous07/16/10
AWESOME
PLEASE DO NOT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by
Anonymous08/08/10
omfg so good
such a great hot storie i read everyone
by
Anonymous09/10/10
This is the best story I've ever read.
And I've read a lot of great stories. I agree, don't stop, it's too good. :)
by
Anonymous09/26/10
You made my weekend!
Read all of it and loved it. Can't wait to read more of your work!
English
the best i ever read
from one to sixty read every word. the very best. you sound as you may have problems. Hope you solve them and that you will continus with your great stories
I loved every word
I've never cum so many times in 2 days ever in my life, your words are like magic pulling me into the story. Thank You
every word
thank you so much..... i have really screwed up my R/L in the office by reading your story from beginning to end over a couple of days... and thank you .... one of the most beautiful and believable stories i have read on Lit, I do hope that your work won't keep you from writing again too much longer for purely my own selfish reasons. A loving delight... now whatever happens to Carly and Beth and Jimmy?? ;)
Oh. My. God!
You sir, are an erotica God.
You do Kinky beyond Kink, Loving beyond Love and you do it well.
Thank You
Whew
Great!
You are a wonderful writer and I hope you continue to write. Your stories are erotic and captivating and they continue to turn me on. Good Job! And keep writing!
By far the best
Wow wow and more wow's. Excellent, incredibly hot writing that I will be reading and rereading for as long as it stays available. I think I will print it....
Thank you for such a wonderfully erotic and sensual story.
Fantastic!
Your story is the best ever written. Every coupling is a very erotic, entirely new experience. The story is intelligent with good sentence structure. Thank you.
A Almost Perfect Awakening All Chapters
With r/l stuff it has taken me a bit of time to read this "book"...Thank You so much for leaving your fans with a actual ending persay instead of hanging like so many of the stories do, Wonderfully written,erotic and oh so sensual...I will continue to read on the rest of your submissions and would love to see you open up into some real bdsm writing if that at all interests you...so many stories in bdsm is left with a unfinished ending and it gets rather flustering. I look forward to reading on as well as searching some new stuff...if you ever publish please post to your bio so us, your fans, can purchase your art...love it love love it...a fan in Texas
Excellent
For a change, Incest dealt with in a heart-warming manner. Romance, sex, and erotica in a two family setting. Well worth the time to read it.
Stryder
Nice Very Nice!!
I have read all of your chapters and I must say that they have turned me on more that anyother. Incest never really turned me on but now i wish i had a brother!
romantic, and adventurous[good stuff].
This whole story, from first to last, was extraordinarily well written. I enjoyed it greatly.
mazing Writer
You, good sir are an amazing writer. i've read all the chapters and i was very impressed i'm also vey glad that u didn't leave me hanging with the lynn-larry situation, i was beginning to wonder if they'd ever tie the knot. anyway, once again, ur story was awesome
Perfection
Without a doubt you have a unique talent and until you walk
this way again - THANK YOU!
Done and out
Took me a couple of days, but the deed is done. All in all alot of goddamn fun! 17(?) catagories of every kind of sex imaginable. Just amazing. Sixty-one chapters, of hot, wet, sweatin', humping, uninhibited debauchery, ending finally with the only emotion that really matters...love. Thanks.
WOW
Wow I must say I enjoyed reading every single chapter it took a while but I can't be any happier continue writing I can't wait to read more
Brilliant
That has to be the best story i've read on this site.
Hopefully your long break will be over soon, I can't wait to read what happens to the rest of the charectars and I'm sure neither can many others.
WOW
That was a brilliant effort keep it up if you can otherwise also thanks for the whole lot you have given.
It would be nice if you can pick up th story say two years down the road and maybe expand the character list as the core group is now comfortable with each other so maybe some unwary new characters can be surprised and added.
You've heard it before.
Dear Wm
I have read and re read your work. I am amazed at your ability to write the way I love to read. The way my minds eye pictures your illiterations. It took me a few days to read and a few more to re read which means you slayed over this work. I feel full and know you must be exhausted.
I devoured your work to the fullest and understand if you don't work on this any more. But if you do I want to enjoy the read as much as this time.
WOW!!!!!!!!
What a saga. I truly enjoy your writng style. In addition to great sexual descriptions, there is a great deal of loving emotion. I enjoy that. I really enjoy the incest stories and I don't really understand why. I grew up with three beautiful, younger sisters and have two beautiful daughters and have never had a conscise[sp] incestuos thought. I don't think it totally wrong as long as it is consentual and handled properly. At any rate I really enjoyed your story. Thanks and I will read more. I am clicking on anonymous because I can't get it to go using my
email and password-sorry.
can't wait
I can't wait to see if you contiue your saga.
Boo Hoo
Can't wait for more. Great writing.
WOW!!
I read all 61 chapters and I must say FABULOUS and BRILLANT!! I was just so into the story that I felt like I was there...Excellent writing and the whole story just flowed and it was a very sexy storyline....Can't wait to read more of your work!!
WOW
With out doubt the best series I have ever read. Great work developing the characters and great insight into how the woman feels. Amazing work, thank you
Phew
This was a superb read - even the chapters that were not by scene held me interested.
Any hope of a further 61 chapters?
Congratulations on a very explicit but well written yarn. I only wish that I could have held as many productive erections in a day as these guys did!!!
AWAITING ... MORE!!!
I can only wish that I could put into words, the thoughts and feelings, that you have put into your writings. If you are bored with the story, get your head out of your ass and write more anyway.
I have never read such a wonderful story with all the love, need, desire and feeling of REAL country life before, so "PLEASE" keep up the "GREAT" work and let us have several more chapters! You are an EXCEPTIONAL Writer!!!
DAN
Horny old bastard loves your story
Great story. Want to see the movie when it cums out I had a woody most of the two days it took me to read it. Thats a big deal because I'm 74 years old. Thanks for all the work you did writing it. All us perv's are grateful for your erotic mind.
A MUST READ
This CAN'T be the end. I impatiently wait with baited breath (and throbbing cock!) for the next installment. This is the best "novel" I have ever read! Talk about a "page-turner"! I've found a new favorite author! You obviously have a talent for writing, and if you ever had any doubts, let them end here. Not only was this the sexiest thing I've ever read, it was also funny, mildly suspenseful, and extremely well told. With the help of a good proofreader (for grammar and spelling ONLY), you could, I'm positively sure, become a best selling writer in any genre in which you choose to enter. Tom Clancy and John Grisham look out! You've got some serious competition coming I fear. (Hell, even the dialogue was good!)
So glad I took the time to read all the chapters
I've been reading stories from this website for a few years now, saw various chapters of this story in several categories but I never got around to reading it because I knew I'd want to read it all and that seemed far too complicated and time consuming. I am so glad that I finally gave in and gave it a chance! After 4 years I'm guessing that this story is not getting any new chapters, that's too bad but I loved every single chapter. Thank you for sharing it with us! ~ daisy
omg
omg dude your story rocked i came so many time over this story ive read all the chaptors and this is the best story ive ever read
pretty hot...
Having read all the chapters, this was the hottest story I've ever read. However, I feel like there is more to be told. Is there? Do we get to see what happens to Jimmy, Beth, and Carly? What about the blossoming relationship between Betty and Wayne? And, what of the "small-town gossip mill"; any ideas as to maybe getting a chapter in about someone seeing something or hearing something involving one or more of the characters? I have to say also that the main relationship between Larry and Lynn while very sexual, was also very touching too. I like that they are engaged to be married. Perhaps there could be some other "encounters" at the wedding? Anyway, good story!
totally amazing
Not sure why I was drawn to your text as I'm not into incest etc - but it was just so mind blowingly amazing. I just couldn't stop reading - it was so orgasmic. Thank you
My god
I came ALOT to this fantastic novel. Superb.
I hope there will be more.
impressed and aroused
Dear Wm,
This is a fabulous story.Complex plot and characters, hot sex and lots of naughty. Goodness gracious! What an epic. I will check out your other work etc but thanks for a moist and sleepless night! I simply could not stop reading it. THanks for the effort and the tremendous quality of your story. I am in your debt. Please keep up the good work. I am now a huge fan.
Oh my word!
Oh my word!! I have not been able to concentrait on anything but your stories since i found them, i have never been so much aroused from just reading! Oh! Thank you very much!!
AMAZING STORY
First off, let me just say that this was an amazing story and I have read the full version three times. Am curious as to whether this story is based on true events. And, as the other commenters have said... AWAITING MORE.
I would have reread this but...
Hi,
I would have reread this but, I still remember too much about what happens next. I'll wait a while longer and come back again.
As a positive statement, what more can I say?
-- srgeek --
Truly amazing
A truly amazing story
great. just great
I read through this in about a month, and, I've gotta say, it was really good. I've been looking for something this long and with such quality after this, but to no avail. There were even parts where the emotional connections made me squirm. Although the ending was pretty predictable (from Wayne on), it made for an amazing novel altogether.
amazing work!
i've read the entire series in a about two weeks. this is amazing work. the detail and use of imagery is wonderful. this is the most fun i've had reading in years.
loved it
I have read this story too many times to count, and i still have amazing reactions to it. Love it, and by far one of the best stories ever.
Holy WOW!
I'm an avid reader of every thing i can get my hands on but it's been many many years since any genera held me so captivated as this did, i finished this thing in under 3 hours and have visited it again 11 times in the last 2 week.
The details are amazingly vivid, your characters are well developed with very lovable personality's, your story line is while maybe a little unlikely still very very believable.
You sir are a fantastic writer and if the rest of your works are as amazing as this one have very very bright future ahead of you, i would easily pay full book price for this work!
in short
[I really love this story.] Yeah, me to brain.
wow
i have read this whole story over the past month and loved it! it made me come harder than ever before
WOW i really loved this
I once thought that the incest thing was just that but now i have a newfound understanding of how it all works. I have read all of your chapters from 1 -61 and thoroughly enjoyed evey word of it. Keep up the good work I love your writings. When will you be adding to this wonderful adventure?
Thank you!
Thank you for writing this story! I have done little else during the past 4 or 5 days other than reading it. Although clearly written to emphasize sexual situations, this story also describes people with just enough realism to allow me to buy into it. The last few chapters even created a satisfying ending, and I finished the story feeling happy and satisfied about the fates of all characters.
I see that all your stories were written eight years ago in 2002. I take that to mean that you experienced a life change at the end of this rather intense writing period so that now you are putting your creativity to use in some other way. I respect this decision, but I also want to indicate that if you should elect to return to writing erotica for this web site, there will probably be a whole lot of people besides just me who will be very happy to read it! In any case, I feel fortunate to have experienced much of the product during your Literotica phase, and I thank you for making it possible!
plz dont stop
plz dont stop making these they r awsome
Thank you
You did it. You wrote a well integrated story that hit practically every popular category and kept me going as quickly as I could move through the stories. Oh, and I'm hot as hell! Great characters, nice development, almost believable plots and I'd love to have my wife and I pulled into these kinds of sexual circumstances by the girls and the guys and Dad and Mom. Thanks again for putting together such a great series.
AWESOME
PLEASE DO NOT STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
omfg so good
such a great hot storie i read everyone
This is the best story I've ever read.
And I've read a lot of great stories. I agree, don't stop, it's too good. :)
You made my weekend!
Read all of it and loved it. Can't wait to read more of your work!
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