All Comments on 'Interview with Tentacle Demon Ch. 02'

by PervOtaku

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Your story is very interesting. Please continue to write this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Loving it!

Please keep going with this story. Interesting depth and great relatable characters. More - keep it coming.

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 10 years ago
Moar!!!

Love the suspense. love how interesting he's acting... xDD Why would he want to leave anymore

purpledragonflypurpledragonflyover 10 years ago
suspense is great

I love his attitude and the suspense you're holding us in. I'm hooked and excited for more.

I just really wish there were more sensory details. Tell us the texture, the smell of things.

One question: in the first chapter, you mention not letting the creatures escape to kill everyone in the compound, and then here you say it's just the scientist and the guard. Is this in error?

Pleasureaddict69Pleasureaddict69almost 10 years ago
Gotta love a Demon

I'm really enjoying this so far. You must've done some research to know about DARPA though. That's awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mmmm...

So creepy. I love it. I especially like the tension you've got between Claire's scientific approach and her obvious murky fascination with this horrible thing. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Things are getting hot :)

Loving it so far, also started reading more of your work too and liking what I'm reading so far.

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