by PervOtaku
Please keep going with this story. Interesting depth and great relatable characters. More - keep it coming.
Love the suspense. love how interesting he's acting... xDD Why would he want to leave anymore
I love his attitude and the suspense you're holding us in. I'm hooked and excited for more.
I just really wish there were more sensory details. Tell us the texture, the smell of things.
One question: in the first chapter, you mention not letting the creatures escape to kill everyone in the compound, and then here you say it's just the scientist and the guard. Is this in error?
I'm really enjoying this so far. You must've done some research to know about DARPA though. That's awesome.
So creepy. I love it. I especially like the tension you've got between Claire's scientific approach and her obvious murky fascination with this horrible thing. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Loving it so far, also started reading more of your work too and liking what I'm reading so far.