All Comments on 'Just One Game Ch. 01'

Ooh me likey. Write more for sure. I love dangerous mysterious men :)

more more more

nicely done!

please worth more , so good , well written !! please please keep it going

Thanks for the feedback so far! This is my first submission and I wanted to see the response before I decided whether or not to continue with a sequel. So glad you enjoyed it...I'll hopefully have the next edition up next week ;)

When will we see the next installment?

Please write more!

please continue the story!

This is really well written .... 1 year ago. I do hope that you will write the next chapter.

I read that in the comments that you were planning to continuing this story in 2013 but no chapter were uploaded. Just wanted to know if you still plan to finish it? The idea is great and I would love to follow it further!

Are you going to finish this?

In reply to your comment anon (and whoever else is wondering when the next chapter is happening) - I posted chapter 2 on Friday so it's obviously taking the full weekend to pend. Keep your eyes out for it tomorrow :)

I like the start… *heads off to read second chapter*