by Soulwolf78
To even suggest that he had killed her mother and raped her and then engage in canabalism. This has nothing to do with Halloween, this is just pschopathically sick.
Even said as a joke, anybody who hinted that they had killed my mother and would rape my sister, would earn my undying hatred and contempt.. 1-*
I really don't care about the nastyness of it all this is a very good story.I would love it if u continued this would be interesting to see how this all turns out
The premise (while not overly Halloween-y) is pretty good as Erotic Horror. You may want to be a little more careful about switching tenses, but all and all, enjoyable. :) Welcome to lit and looking forward to future submissions.
Erotic Horror ! You took it to next level !!!
Scared but enjoyed it so much.....