by smokeyjewell
Plus, how the fuck many volleyball players have long hair? NONE! For writing a sexually hot story, three points-for not having a single clue about the subject matter? -3. Total points: ZERO!
The story was great, not perfect, but still really good.
Try to add more details next time. Add an in-between; build the chemistry and sexual tension more, time spent in the classroom while he's teaching her.
And to the anon bitching, almost EVERY college volleyball player has long hair, watch a set or two, and you'll see that.
The anon that was shit talking, one if you don't like it go write your own crap, two I know a lot of volleyball players that have long hair(me included). So shut the fuck up maybe you need to get your facts straight. Get off your pedestal cause you aren't as badass as you think. Freaking shit talking in anon! I wish I had a account so I could show you what an ass you are.