All Comments on 'Kings and Queens Ch. 01'

by westmeath1980

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Punctuation

I couldn't read past the first paragraph. It was one long drawn out sentence. Please think about the use of an editor, and learn how to use punctuation.

sandymonroesandymonroeover 10 years ago

No dialogs, no grammar, no punctuation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Punctuation Rules

I figured out the punctuation rules for this story.

Each paragraph ends with a period!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Ugh

Might be a good story but it's unreadable. Punctuation is important. Make it your friend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More Hot!!!

What a turn on!!

Write more please!!!

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