All Comments on 'An Unforgettable Dream'

Written by a total wanker

You need some help with your mechanics

Really poorly written and not at all sexy.

Not sure if you're a native speaker of English, but at the very least you need an editor.

This is a perfect example of why you shouldn't try writing stories with only one hand.

Well, forgive me, but I thought it was a cute quickie and I enjoyed it for what it was, not expecting some great work of literature.