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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
re: This is the FIRST part of what is a running story

Would it have killed you to use a chapter # in the title to warn that this wasn't a complete story? (BTW, using different title for each part of one story is even worse.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I think the guy below was mad he didn't get off before the story ended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Interesting story

Sometimes circumstances cause encounters like this. It can be fun and also build confidence. must have good attitude for it to work

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WELL DAMN!!!

Dude at the bottom is pissed cause he didnt cum before the story ended. Dude, its called pussy. Get some

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I'm a girl and I thought the story was hot idk what to say bout the bottom dude but he obviously feel some type of way

thebuffalothebuffaloover 10 years ago

Gullible little thing, wasn't she.

Well written. It was entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ridiculously waiting for sequel

loved it, made me think of a chick from work who has a sexy arse... and imagined her as my sister, and cumming inside her arse.

SEQUEL!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
next

Makr this into a story plzzzzz

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
That was so hot

You better make a sequel soon. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
We all gt it the end,

Mother had eleven of us kids from as many different married men. Five daughters and six sons all sleeping boy girl in a bed. Inside and in our back yard we wore no clothes and the girls stated to develope like mother at age eight. By ten the girls were large C's and at twelve we all were into FFF's. Mother beasts were double H's and she loved playing football naked with her daughters and her sons. Her sons loved having the females being centers giving them an easy target at our inviting holes which they all love to fill with their cum going deep into each of us. As our periods started the babies soon followed along with our brothers getting their girlfriends and their mothers pregnant also.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
sequel

there has to be a sequel!

where the other brother or dad do her up the bumas well!

the whole series should be about them all having their way with her without crossing paths with each other... otherwise it's just another boring group incest orgy story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
2 Part Question......

1. When are you going to publish the next chapter?

2. Will both brothers DP their sweet, submissive, cum dumpster of a little slut sister?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
please

please, please, please continue this story!!!!

begging you

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sequal please!!!!

A sequal with the brother and his girlfriend would be so hot! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

where is the sequel?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
REQ for sequel

This is one of the best fuckin incest stories I have ever read. No romantic bullshit, but pure unharmful exploitation.

I keep coming back here for a sequel. WTF man? This is very fuckin rich! If you need ideas, just let me know.

Fuck this. If I don't see a sequel by new year's I'm doing one myself!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
wheres the sequel i need it

Great story and we need the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
where

Where's the sequel this is a great story

Neon_UltraNeon_Ultraover 7 years agoAuthor
Anal Alice Act 2

The next chapter of Anal Alice is up! Sorry for the giant wait!

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
Not very smarrt

but still got me hard

dutch513nelsdutch513nelsover 5 years ago
Not bad

Good short story . Thank you .

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great characters

I read all six chapters, I love the characters and psychology and the relationships between them, but there are too many double anal for my taste (and it's not very plausible at this point), and there's surprisingly few oral scenes compared to it. Everything else, including the style, is great. I really love the Alice character, how her brothers and parents treat her, how she's slowly thinking everything's "normal" or fine, and how she's little by little put into her ideal role of always available submissive 100% anal slut. I'm looking forward new chapters and seeing her being "perfected" little by little, and used more and more as she should, while keeping totally innocent and 100% virgin vaginally and with her useless clit.

PLSilvermanPLSilvermanover 4 years ago
ayo NEON

its ya boy, a BIG BLACK BOY. You best come throw up a chaptr to this soon bruv, or swear down imma ave to do one m'self mate. Swear down cuz.

odrainodrainabout 4 years ago

This entire story, all chapter's of it, it's among the best pieces of erotica I have ever seen. From videos, images and writings it's really too stuff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nice series

Waiting for the next part of the story.

Westman99Westman99about 2 years ago

Not sure of the plausibility of her accepting the situation.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I wish my sister would of let me do that. I shared a sofa bed with my brothers and they both had tight asses.

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