All Comments on 'Your Wish Is My Command'

by Dirt Man

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noirdom92noirdom92about 20 years ago
Good story

The story was written with a very good flair.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
excellent

Wonder if she knew who was fucking her. Great story, great ending.

BazzzBazzzover 16 years ago
Excellent imagination

A very good story. Your imagination is great. I would get an editor though. Some sorts of your story are a bit confusing as it seems you rushed through to get it on here. Still I am going to read your other interracially themed stories as this one was very original.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Your vs You're

You're is a contraction for "you are." Your is a possessive way of expressing ownership. "You're the best, baby." "Whose is it?" "Yours!"

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