All Comments on 'Great Outdoors'

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
mmm

Nice, cliché language but enjoyable. I mean, honestly, there aren't that may ways to describe this stuff lol. I liked your rhymes and stanzas.

Bridget69Bridget69over 10 years ago

Nice sense of liberation. I like when the act of intimacy isn't confined to the standard bedroom setting.

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