All Comments on 'Jessie & The Tornado Ch. 04'

I've thoroughly enjoyed reading your story so far and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you.

This cant be the last part? If it isnt please finish it?

The blonde, UGA & marine jokes are getting old, I get its a part of them but come on! Plus for 22 year old's Jessie and her friends are awfully immature!

Great story!

a foxhole tale,

This is the best story I have read on this site.I am constantly grinning while reading their playful banter.Now,I have to read the next chapter.

I looked at the average height of soccer players and it is 5'7". I know you wanted to add that to the humor of the story, but most women soccer players aren't tall. That would be tough dragging around that height for over 90 minutes. If you had said she was a volleyball or basketball player than all of them being tall would have made sense. Plus I just want say that her teammates were ridiculously about some lame UGA jokes. Still a not bad story, just not enough between the two together.

Yo are going to talk shit about how tall soccer players are. Google the US Womens soccer team. Ass Hat!!

no such thing as an ex Marine !!!!!!!!

another 1 who hasn't written & put a story for others to read . when you do then maybe you can nit pick others that do. I read them for enjoyment . flareb2343@gmail.com

I did google us soccer team and the average height is 5.2’ or around 5’3” which is actually shorter than than the the total average. So if you don’t write a story you can’t comment? I don’t think that is how the website works. I have thought about writing a story and have even began some. It is hard to write something that is good readable. I was in no way knocking the author who I did say the story was good, by the way. I was just pointing out something that could have been more accurate. I am in no way perfect, but I like constructive criticism. I feel like that is what I was providing. Have a great day everyone. P. S. I know it is a long time after my original comment.