All Comments on 'Babysitter On Camera'

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Nicely done. Good flow and good English.

Fun little story. 5 stars.

Delicious variation on your most common theme...never mind the asshole too-scared-to-use-his-own-name Anon...he reads EVERY single story you write....strange eh what??

Would have made a great Illustrated story.

This is my fav so far... Please do write about the 2nd performance & what happened the next day she came for baby sitting.... with more details possibly with a bit of nipple torture :)

I agree with Averygoodlay. This certainly didn't seem like the first time for either character, except maybe with each other.

In fact judging by the girl's attitude, actions and reactions, it sounds as though she'd had more pricks than a pub dartboard.