All Comments on 'Night of Choices'

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mBrowmBrowover 10 years ago
Exciting!

Fun story! Enviable situation, I think!

However, edit,

Such is there (sic) their choice though and in my opinion better than the waste of the third choice.

Thanks for writing!

jonmartin22jonmartin22over 10 years ago
nice!

Nice erotic short..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I liked the premise of the story, well done. Since it's titled Night of Choices, it would have been interesting if you had done another episode showing how the guy Tom sees on the television got to where he ended up...with the vampiress wearing the huge strap-on. At least for the part where he is taken to the basement and makes his choice followed by the ensuring "initiation." Oh, well... :)

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