All Comments on 'Emotional Freeze'

This is the best and most powerful poem I have read on Literotica.

It aims for the jugular and hits its target.

Incredibly easy for a poem of this nature to fall into cliche. Every time it appears to come near to that it is saved by cadence.

It very carefully captures incoherence. If it were neater it would not work.

Meaning, structure and cadence.

Well done.