All Comments on 'Sam Comes to Stay'

Very good hope for more

Good start. Hope more to come. Sister -Sister action maybe later?

... you really need to proof read!

A couple of times errors changed the complete sense of a sentence!

Example - "As the bottoms hit the floor I admired her round firm behind and could help but to reach up ..." - 'couldn't help'??

The plot is as old as the hills The shy virgin gives it up with amazing rapidity The guy is tempted but doesn't take the slightest precaution, i.e., procure some condoms

The plot is fine. Too bad HH (His Higness?) is so jaded. Looking for elevated sophistication on a porn site, eh? Sweeeet.

And the grammar/punctuation police? Irregardless of their hypocrisy they misunderestimate you.

Thank you, ITDan3, for writing this and sharing it with us and welcome to Literotica. I hope you will continue to write for us and I can tell you that your work will only get better, so try to ignore the 'downers'.

It's often quite surprising how quickly and enthusiastically a newcomer adopts new practices - especially sex!

Your story was far from perfect but it was a good and welcome start - well done!

Your jest a fucking wanker

I really liked this story, keep your word on it and I'll definitely read part 2!

I'm shocked! Don't worry about the complainers. I'm here for enjoyable stories, not great literature - and this one is a *very* enjoyable story even if it's been done before. Looking forward to reading more adventures with the sister-in-law.

Please keep writing, SILs are my absolute favorite.