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The One Less Traveled By Ch. 10

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by Anonymous11/03/13

More Sheila

I'm not so sure that Nicole really loves Nick. They have cut off Nick from sex and she spends most of her time with Collin. Another man is is running their lives and may be
exciting for Nick now but hopefully he will open his eyes and see that he is losing
Nicole. I'd like to see him walk away from Nicole and ignore her. Maybe even take up with Sheila. It would be nice if Sheila and Nick went out and just happened to run into
Nicole and Collin, then we'd get some fireworks. I'm not usually into this type of story so I'd like to see more of Nick standing up for himself and less of Collin running the show.

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by LordSlamdawgg11/03/13

It is what it is - very well written, VERY perverse!

I knew something like this was going to drop with 20k+ country club membership & Collin's guidance on deal that cemented Nick's promotion. Likewise Nick doming Collin on golf course was going to prompt reveal of steel hand underneath velvet driving glove.

To Nick, this is still a symbiotic relationship. He's not complaining. So be it. The characters are shrugging off traditional roles and exploring ramifications of their inherent natures risking a considerable fallout at multiple levels.

I will note the feeling of being a cuck was likened in this story, to gambling at blackjack. Now that's something I know about. In ' normal play', the house has an edge and will win over the long term. The player will enjoy short run wins but without an edge ska counting cards, the ending is preordained. to being a losing one.

This story read very well in terms of it's edgy and disturbing content. Nick has abdicated what's known as traditional manhood, to the point where his kids are going to find out at the very least: Mommy has a boyfriend . That boggles my mind. Nicole patronizes him. Is he prepared for more of the same, from his kids?

Kudos to the JayCuck for not blanching or blinking from his pre-announced agenda. Can this author find an winning edge for Nick in the midst of his successive surrenders?

Many authors would have crashed trying to keep a semblance of credibility and sympathy for these multi-faceted, constantly evolving characters and their dichotomous desires. Nick has somehow kept an ineffable dignity, in place of despair, throughout what most would regard as insufferable travails.

An author awareness of the shock value of each fresh outrage ( to reader sensibility) is ever present & is explained in best possible light without tripping up narrative pace. Those saving graces have kept me engaged as a reader.For those achievements and others, I rate this story at full marks.

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by Anonymous11/03/13

Now Its Just a Parody of Itself

Like all cuckold stories it becomes more about the humiliation of the husband than the relationships of those involved. Off the rails. Kind of a shame. Well written but like all of the type stories it ceases to be erotic except for the few fetishists this appeals to. Cannot see this ending well for NIck but then that was pretty much a given wasn't it.

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by blackcrystal8311/03/13

Wonderful!

This was great! I am so happy that Collin is taking a more dominant role in the relationship now, and I'm glad that Nicole and nick are preparing their kids to understand Nicole and Collin's relationship. I love that Nicole is jealous of Sheila and that she insists nick wear the chastity device if he sees her again. I really like the double standard being applied; I'm really praying that nick won't get to have sex with Sheila. Although it would be great if Collin had sex with Sheila! I hope that Collin will someday impregnate Nicole. Wonderful story!

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by Anonymous11/03/13

Excellent!

The cuck angst is so palpable. I salivate for every chapter. I was checking often for this update and had butterflies in my stomach when I saw it pop up.

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by Anonymous11/03/13

The first page was great but the rest? Not so much.

Love means putting the other person before yourself and Nicole disrespects and demeans her husband at every opportunity. She treats him like a roommate with benefits and while she says she loves him, her actions prove otherwise. Collin praises Nick on the one hand for not being a pushover while demanding Nick become a submissive to him. And Nick complies with it! He treats Nick worse than a dog and yes, Collin is a dick.


As for Nick, considering he passively acquiesced to Collin and his (soon to be ex) wife in every regard, he has shown that he really is a spineless, gutless, wimp assed cuckold and I have zero respect for that. I can understand his reluctance to engage in a relationship with Sheila; but to not stand up for himself to Nicole, who accused him of an inappropriate relationship while SHE IS THE ONE FUCKING SONEONE ELSE, is the height of hypocrisy. She doesn't want Nick for a husband, she wants him so she can sadistically torment him and I have to ask the author: Is that love?

I suggest that until the author determines whether or not Nicole loves her (current) husband, he stop with the "I love you" bullshit because talk is cheap and her actions say differently.

I hope Nick enjoys being the butt of the joke because as his daughters do grow up, they are not likely to have any respect for the man who refuses to fight for his marriage. It's hard to respect a man who is just the sperm donor and their mothers roommate, it's hard to have any respect for a man who won't be a man and Nick isn't a man. He's just the roommate who is their cook, cleaning lady, nanny and wallet.

Hopefully he either gets his balls or eats a bullet because he won't be missed.

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by Anthony6018511/03/13

So many levels in this story.

Firstly....the writing is excellent as always. Enough information to make the characters seem real. So real in fact I wonder how close this comes to JayCucks reality. I feel like a neighbor who sees a black man visiting my beautiful neighbors and wonder if there is more to the story......but I digress. Collin is slowly slipping the noose around Nick's neck and I feel he knows that fact but refuses to face it. He is smart so hopefully he can make the break, however I doubt it. Collin can pull the big account with John with just a phone call and Nick would look bad to the board if he lost their biggest account under his watch.

Nicole is thinking with her pussy and is addicted to her new submissive role which is odd because that wasn't her personality initially. Sheila is Nicks ace in the hole and could be his release back to the real world. I hope he nails her many times and can hear a woman tell him how good he is and mean it. The girls may be the only thing that keeps them together and I'm a little uncomfortable with the idea of letting them know about their moms true relationship with Collin. One more thing that makes the story seem like a stretch is Collins ability at close to age 50 to get 4 and 5 erections in a short time without pharma help. That ain't happening in real life! I don't care what kind of stud he may have been in his younger days.

As always this rates a 5* because of the quality of writing. The content is way beyond me, but I have to see this story to the end.....which I hope doesn't happen soon. I'm saddened the trolls feel the need to low ball it because they hate the content. We all know they don't vote till after they cum in their mommas underpanties.

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by Anonymous11/03/13

re: Anthony60185-so many levels..........

Here we go again. Slamming opposing opinions. What does that make you? The very same person who you so detest- a troll. Your kind just can't help themselves. Insulting comments to others doesn't help the author. It just has the opposite effect. Thanks for showing your true colors, the real troll among us.

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by Anonymous11/03/13

Congratulations
You get a # 1 for taking the time to post

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by Anonymous11/03/13

LOL

WOW Ill bet it took you a long time to write this crap. # 1 There was no # 0

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by Anonymous11/03/13

You one of the worse new writers to show up recently

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by cal600911/03/13

Holy Cow!!

This is the white man’s worse nightmare. The behavior and attitudes of Collins, the handsome, highly intelligent, wealthy and successful BIG COCK BLACK STUD, is every white man’s-- with roots in 19 Century America-- fear that MANDINGO is going to get their woman. Its clear the due is using a a playbook developed by his friends to fuckk married white women and humiliate their husbands.The story line is about the corruption of a successful middle class family, including the children. You can’t get any worse trhan that. The hatred expressed in the comments of mainly anonymous readers reminds me of similar expressions about the President. Jay_cuck please continue. I love it!

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by Anonymous11/03/13

I am not a fan of this genre, but I will at least say it is well written. That being said, i have to ask, why don't you just kill Nick off already? His wife does not love him, his kids will soon believe he is a joke and Collin treats him like Mike Vick at a dog show.
Some realism, any sort of realism would be nice....have Nick have some sort of backbone....even if one is a cuckhold they don't allow this sort of degradation or turn this great of a blind eye to their situation. The story would be way better if if was not so much about humiliating the husband.

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by solaris6911/03/13

A pen is mightier than a sword

What a way to finish the story!!!
If let's say we don't talk about the story type, the quality of writing is amazing. I think most of the readers will agree with me.
Although everybody who has the brain can know what is the end of story since chapter 1, it still attracted me to come and read through this chapter. I didn't feel surprised that the story ended more or less same like normal cuckold story, but still very alluring and attracting.
Well done JC. Hopefully you will write loving wives story in future

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by Anonymous11/03/13

Excellent. I love thjis story

Excellent writing and story development. So many ways to go..
John, Shelia finding out..
Nicole holding the double standard.... I see Nicole being the one to end it, when she realizes she will lose Nick... but not before there is a pregnancy scare and Nick if forced to wear panties and get familiar with Collins cock..
Please keep going. I hope the story does not end here. If you won't continue, perhaps you can ask other to continue the story.

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by Anonymous11/03/13

Nice Update!

Great chapter. You are writing such great characters. Especially Nick, the way you are bringing us into his mind is amazing. The way you're writing him draws me into his struggle to accept his desires without losing everything he holds dear. Nicole is seemingly going through something really similar. She loves, just loves, the new relationship dynamics of her relationships, but doesn't want to destroy her marriage. Collin clearly likes Nicole and he doesn't want to rush Nick to fast into the cuckold lifestyle.

My only complaint, and this is more of a personal preference for these types of stories, is that you don't introduce a pregnancy. It really kills the sexy vibe of the story for me. If they have a kid, especially if Collin impregnates Nicole, then there relationship is pretty much out in the open and everybody would know.

Also, your bio says that you're starting a new series. Please don't and just concentrate on this cool world that you have created.

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by Anonymous11/04/13

no more love.....

there is no more love for Nick in Nicole's heart..... no more respect for the man who was once her husband and is now not a man at all but a wimp ass castrated cuckold........ you write well but the subject of this story has become just another wacc story........ you have turned Nick into a stereotype and if his daughters are okay with Collin being their new daddy then you have no idea how it would really affect them............ there is no real life here just fantasy if you have any member of the family still respect Nick after this is all over............ he is unworthy of respect now and neither are you........ I hope you can live with not being able to do anything anymore and the public humiliation and loss of your family and job once it all gets out that you live as a non-man....... if my husband tried this with me I would divorce him in a second and make sure that everyone knew what he was so thank god that I am married to a real man

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by Anonymous11/04/13

Very well!

Excelent written amazing story! I was looking for this part every day and I hope the next part will be published very soon. I like as the humiliation of Nick is going deeper and deeper. Nick likes his humiliation too, please go forward with it. And some intercourse between Nick and Sheila can get some pepper in to it. There can Nick feel being as a man again, but for short time. In the end he can lost Sheila to Colin too and then Nick will be as "Double cockold". That can be hot chilli pepper for the story line!
Thank you for this story. Thank you for your time. You are very good writter.
Sebastian

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by Anonymous11/04/13

Just Another weak Cuckold

Thus story started well, but has just become another Big Black Cock and white wimp husband tale. Shame really. As for the suggestion that a 14 year old be told of the arrangemant that is just sick and shows what bad parents you both are.

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by Anonymous11/04/13

pure garbage
1* cuz I can't give less.

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by Anonymous11/04/13

Do us a favor don't waste our time, keep your stories to your self

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by Anonymous11/04/13

You need a brain surgery to take out all that crap that you have whitin your rotten skull

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by Anonymous11/04/13

Didn't read

Saw a JayCuck story and immediately voted 1 star

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by Anonymous11/04/13

Fantastic continuance

Loving the road that this is traveling, Hotwife/cuck lifestyle is the most intense that there is because of the excitement that both wife & hubby feel at every level. I just hope that Colin doesn't impregnate Nicole as this lifestyle & children don't go hand in hand, it just causes disfunctionate families & after reading some of the comments on this latest chapter, there are enough narrow minded trolls in this world already

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by Anonymous11/04/13

What the hell wrong with people who said "didn't read'?
If you don't want to read, don't come here. JC already stated in the beginning of story that this is the interracial cuckold. So everybody can understand that Nick is not like the superhero character who can conquer the world and fuck as many women as he can. Very annoying to see such stupid comments under the cuckold story.

Anyway, I'd like to highlight some things in your story line regarding creampie. If I am not mistaken, Nick had already gone down on Nicole after Collin finished with him (I think in some earlier chapter). So, in the bedroom scene, why you described that Nick was reluctant about that. I think you missed the point there.

And, I assumed you wanted to show Nick character as strong and successful (not a wimp husband). That's why you introduced Nick leadership in work and flirt with Sheila (All these). But to me, they are useless because Nick didn't put up the fight in dealing with Collin. If I were you, I will create one scene in which Nick put very bravery act for Nicole which no one can do. For example, may be put himself infront the drunken car's driver while Nicole, Collin and Nick (three of them) cross the road. Such a move will heighten Nick's character and Nicole will finally understand there will be one husband for her.

Thanks for your story!!

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by Anonymous11/04/13

We just love this story

This story have a plot that make the story realistic.

I just told my 16 years old daughter that our black friend really is my lover, and that her dad loves my way of life. I don`t told her that her father was in cage, but I told her that he not was allow to fuck me any more. I also told her that my lover now was in charge, and that he told me what cloths I was to wear and what i was to do. So this is the reason that i normally not was wearing bras any more and why my skirts was shorter than normally.

She has a lot of questions, but I told her that she would her and learn more later on.

Please ad a new chapter soon, I just love this story.

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by kennyboy8211/04/13

Continues to enthrall

This story gets better with every chapter!

I suspect I know the identity of the last (anonymous) poster who spoke about her real life situation with her 16 y.o. daughter and her caged cuck husband, get in touch Mrs. Anon! We should talk!

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by Anonymous11/04/13

I hope you get your self respect back someday

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by Anonymous11/04/13

Congratulations
You get a # 1 for taking the time to post

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by Anonymous11/04/13

I will not be reading any more of your stories.

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by SyrustheVirus11/04/13

While cuckhold fantasies are not for everyone, this is no longer what I consider a cuckhold story. What started out as an interesting series as quickly turned into how much can we embarrass the husband. One very important aspect of all cuckhold situations is love. Both parties derive pleasure from what they are doing resulting in them becoming closer throughout the experience. The exact opposite is happening her. It is only a matter of time before Nicole leaves Nick now. Furthermore, Nicole is going out of her way to deprive Nick of any happiness by preventing anything from happening with Sheila.
Where at the beginning of the series I could have predicted that all parties would have been involved with each other happily, but now I see Nicole and Sheila standing over Nick's corpse laughing before walking into the sunset with Collin. Its a shame that was once a good series has now just turned into another racists fetish.

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by Anonymous11/04/13

great series

I really enjoy your writing style and I love this series.. keep up the good work. I am a fan

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by Anonymous11/04/13

MORE!!

The pool and bedroom scenes were HOT.
Hope to see you highlight Nick's personal success outside of Colin's shadow. Now that he's caged you need to keep him from becoming a stereotype -- sliding that way at the end of this chapter.
Would love to see Nick get a DVD of Nicole's first threesome with Colin and another woman. Personally I'd love to see Colin force Nicole to look into his eyes as she orgasms while two women eat her pussy and ass.
Also look forward to hearing how Nicole actually helps Collin, more scenes at the club, and see Sheila and the club bartender keep Nick's ego balanced. Don't think Nick needs an affair but I'd like to see some respect and affection to replace what he might not be getting emotionally from Nicole.

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by NewYorkerotic11/04/13

The Endless Tunnel

The curious reader who is initially drawn to the vicarious appeal of this conflicted and complicated fantasy gradually realizes that, upon a closer look, the arc of the tale has taken an increasingly intense and dark turn as the characters have become a kind of co-dependent triad, with the chronically-ambivalent husband, Nick, seemingly addicted to a situation that, if it continues as it has, would appear to end only badly for him, as his dubious wife, Nicole, hopelessly under the spell of her controlling and calculating boyfriend, Collin, manipulates the vulnerability of her nominal husband for her own ego gratification, with no depth of regard for him or their children, her self-interest masquerading as continuing affection, as should be obvious from her having to be repeatedly reminded of her family obligations. And what is really disturbing is that Nick, who had skirted the truth with his daughters in order to cover for their adulterous mother, now seems prepared to confide at least to his oldest daughter the true nature of her mother's relationship with Collin. (This story indulges in a number of gender, class and racial stereotypes -- not uncommon for this genre.) What is fascinating, though, is that, despite his ongoing weakness for his wife's affair and his seeming inferior place in the triad, the anguished Nick actually holds the key to the outcome here, as the eager and willing Nicole combined with the icy Collin will only continue down the path they have chosen unless met with an equal or greater force. It is Nick who must decide to either go down with them to his own psychic, if not physical, demise (which is actually not what Nicole and the even more exploitive Collin want, as their ever-escalating cuckold relationship needs to feed off Nick's dependency), or he survives as a whole person by breaking free of the vicious cycle he is caught in, finally realizing that what may have started out as an erotic game is now for sure being played for keeps by his wife and her de facto mate and can only ruin him should he become trapped in their web and on their terms, stuck in an endless tunnel of humiliation just so he can bust a better nut. (There is nothing wrong with transcending archaic social convention and creating a new interpersonal paradigm. But what exactly? And at what price? A truly dynamic and transformative practice based on genuinely mutual and exuberant love? Or essentially an old one even if in a seemingly unorthodox and liberating form, based on cold self-interest and exploitation, rooted in the past, that is just another rulebook facsimile of true, joyous and shared love?) Now that the story has been brought up to the present after a lengthy summary, we read of the emasculated Nick reduced to little more than a mere chauffeur, driving the shallow Nicole to a weekend-long tryst at her boyfriend's house without even a hug and a kiss for Nick from his evermore drifting wife, a woman who may be sultry on the surface but who is hollow at the core, like a succubus out of medieval mythology, but perhaps a fitting match for the shell of a man that Nick is becoming, as he obviously resigns himself to a sad and inevitable fate. Yet despite it all, like the innocent bystander at the scene of some grotesque accident, I can't seem to look away, and that is to the author's credit, though eventually you do move on, and it all becomes just a fading memory, glad that one was only a viewer and not a player in the developing tragedy.

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by Anonymous11/04/13

LOL

WOW Ill bet it took you a long time to write this crap. # 1 There was no # 0

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by Anonymous11/04/13

wimpy

Please kill nick off as his no man, nicole has no respect 4 him and collin is typical black man with chip on his shoulder, if u out him to the kids I think kids should be taken away from sexual deviants, good writing but hopefully. Nick kills himself cause wen it gets out hell be sacked and complete joke E1

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by Anonymous11/04/13

After submitting to story for a few days, the author got nearly 40 comments on this chapter. This is quite an achievement I will say.
But something I don't understand is Jaycuck is not the first writer who came out with the cuckold story. Even Karenky and xleglover, all wrote interracial cuckold stories. But some narrow minded people made a lot of scenes here. I wonder why.

For me, this was very interesting series and I was really amazed that the author skills in writing about Nick's struggle between normal husband and cuckold one.
Please carry on, Jaycuck. Don't feel disappointed because of all the negative comments

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by Paul Pines11/04/13

Best of the best!

Of everything you've written , this chapter is the best of an amazing collection. You really "get" the true cuckold and cuckoldress - two people who love each other and find a non-traditional way to express that love.

Bravo! I wish the people who write cuckold-garbage could be made to read this!

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by jsmythe30011/05/13

An epic train wreck

Like that train wreck I want to look away but I just cannot. I had to read it to see what you would do to Nick now and how Collin and Nicole would get over on him this time. I can see how Jasmine and April will react when they all sit down and tell the girls what Collin and Nicole have been up to this whole time.

Nick: Jasmine and April there is something we need to tell you about Collin and your mother and me. (Nick is cut off by his older daughter as she laughs at him)

Jasmine: I know father and Collin has already promised me that he will deflower me on my 18th birthday and mother is all right with it. You did not know that did you? I can see by the surprise and shame on your face that you do not want it to happen. There is nothing you can do to stop it father since I no longer respect you and April has figured it out too.

April: Father you must know that we love Collin and he is going to be our father now not you anymore. He is also going to take my virginity when I turn 18 and there is nothing you can do about that either. He owns us now and we will all be getting his name tattooed above our pussies showing he owns us now.

Nicole: You cuck you thought you had some control here when you never did. I hope you can live with what you have done and if not we will forget you if you kill yourself. Collin is the man here and you are not a man anymore. All you are good for is watching the girls while I am with Collin. I have sent pictures and a letter explaining them to your boss and you have been fired by the way. Now you can spend every moment watching the girls while Collin and I play. You will never be allowed out of that cock cage again unless you have to wash down there or shave. Collin or I will be there to make sure that you do not get any sexual gratification ever again. You are a wimp despite your protestations and we are going to take advantage of that. Sheila does not want you anymore since I explained everything to her too.

Collin: Nick you fool you played right into my hands. Your wife and daughters are mine now body and soul. You never had a chance from the first time I saw your hot wife and put my plan into motion to humiliate you white cuck. I have already destroyed more white marriages than you can count with my long black dong and you will have to accept the new reality. Your wife is mine. Your daughters are mine. Your job is gone. You will be a cuckold forevermore trapped inside your home. If you leave your home you will be ridiculed by anyone who knows you as everyone knows what kind of person you are.

They all laugh as Nick sees no way out other than a bullet to his own brain.

JayCuck you have turned this into a stereotypical albeit well written cuckold story but this is the most realistic ending to what you have written so far. There will be no respect or love for Nick from anyone once the whole thing gets out and Collin will own them all until he dies or they do.

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by Anonymous11/05/13

A great ending???

I loved this story and liked the way you ended it back where we started. I feel there is more to come from all of the people involved. Take a rest if needed be but lets hear how the weekend goes and how they deal with more people knowing of their chosen path.

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by Anonymous11/05/13

Great

You MUST continue with the story!!! :)

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by solaris6911/06/13

I liked the way you introduced fleshlight to Nick. And I was amazed that you came out with the brilliant idea of Nick's eavesdropping at his own master bedroom. It's been so funny and as well so exciting to read that moment. I am not sure whether there will be chapter 11 or not. I think most of the things done by cuckold couple, all were written in pervious 10 chapters. I knew you were toying the ideas to continue. I keep my fingers crossed that within next two weeks, I see something in your story section

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by Anonymous11/06/13

Thank You

The whole story was great. It was good that Collin and Nick were able to talk together rather than information being through Nicole. Communication and trust are important in any relationship.

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by JayCuck11/06/13

The Series Will Continue

Hi. I will be continuing the series, however it will be a while before I post the next chapter. Thank you to everyone who has read and/or responded.

Take care. J.

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by Anonymous11/06/13

It was nice to hear about continuation of series although I m not sure whether you will write with different title or different point of view (may be from Nicole).
In any way, I would like to request at least one chapter per 3 weeks time, if possible. Otherwise it will affect the enthusiasm of readers and intensity of story. I am not pushing you for non-stop writing. And I also respect your time for each chapter. Almost every chapter has at least 4 pages, which may be hard for you and of course was very good for real supporters like me
Will Always come and check your story every weekend
Once again thanks.

P.S for those who don't like this kind of story, just stay away from this story and no stupid comment also !!!

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by Anonymous11/07/13

Ch 10 was totally worth the wait

Clearly the series is on an upswing. There are so many ways to extend this theme and I will look fwd to the next few chapters. Not sure what time frame you have in mind when you say that the other chapters will take their time. I thought Ch 10 was a long break!

The next 2 chapters could probable be more of the adventures of the threesome before they need to speak to Jasmine. I love the way Nicole is doing her best to understand what turns Nick on and indulging in role play.

Will you be continuing your other series (South Padre Island Vacation)? That one seems to be crying out for a continuation too. Hope you are enjoying yourselves writing these stories as much as we love reading them.

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by JayCuck11/07/13

South Padre Island Series

Thank you. Yes I will be continuing that series. I'm glad that you noticed that Nicole and Collin are trying to help include Nick and indulge the things he likes as well. That was important to me and I'm happy you saw that.
Thanks
J

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by Anonymous11/08/13

This chapter was the best one yet. Things are heating up. Thank you for all your fine effort. Great story.

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by LordSlamdawgg11/08/13

CollIn is a cancer to Nick's manhood & won't stop until this man is effectively a eunuch !

The civil words and extravagant gifts are belied by Collin & Nicole's actions & new rules. First of all, I want to say this is skilled writing by a talented writer. Bur by now, this story belongs in erotic horror or fetish.

For the price of cigars, a country club membership and a ringside seat to the Collin & Nicole's trysts, Nick has allowed himself to ousted from his own bed. It's not enough these two spend nights together at Collin's abode, now they've taken over hearth & home. Soon the daughters will know about this depraved arrangement.

Should the facts leak out to public, the kids will face chaos and ridicule because the supposed adults can't keep it on the down-low. This is the logical extension of the facts as presented. As said before, JayCuck is a talented author but he's effectively written himself in a corner.

In terms of palatability and credibility, this story is played out. I rated this story at full marks and hope I'm wrong. By JayCuck's own admission - it's getting progressively more time intensive & difficult to write this tale. Regardless, I thank him for sharing but in terms of detailing a hard core cuck lifestyle , it seems this will be equally as difficult to follow.

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by Anthony6018511/09/13

More scenarios for this story.

Some have mentioned the good ideas are used up and the story could get stale in the near future. Nick has let his cards show and Collin and Nicole could still find ways to thrill/torture poor Nick. Collin has yet to ask Nick to lay on his back while Nicole straddles his face and Collin fucks Nicole from behind. Nick would feel those giant balls mash against his forehead each time C pushes into her and taste the creampie or even better have Nicole jack Collins load all over Nick face. Think of what a high it would be for Nick to hold Collins cock and put it into his wife.

On the other hand Nick could snap out of his self imposed addiction and put limits on C and N which would cause grief to his wife possibly causing her to see Collin without Nicks approval setting the stage for a showdown. If Nick and Sheila become an item, Collin could introduce her to one of his well hung clients and spoil Nicks fun.....again. The bartender at the club could also play into this.

Something wild has to happen at the new house and one would think a 14 year old daughter would soon be seeing that all is not well between her mom and dad. The possibility of a baby on the horizon also portends conflict if Nicole goes off the pill and Collin refuses to wear a condom.

Thank you to Jay for continuing the story and best of luck in writing.

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