All Comments on 'Road Trip Rogue Ch. 02'

by Strawberry_2051

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great !

Poetic bloody justice. Love it.

LechemanLechemanover 10 years ago
Good Story, Only One Muff

Thought the story very sexy and erotic you muffed one section. Early in the story you mentioned the following: "Bad yes, but we would always be relieved and proud of the fact that we hadn't actually had sex. We would always wonder how far we would've gone if we had birth control".

By the end of the story Sharon was relieved she had not fallen pregnant.

Apart from that I enjoyed the story.

Well done!

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