by TheBrokenSword
I'm sorry, I can see what you were trying to do but even in your own opening comment, you put me off, but I tried to read your story. I think its the wrong attitude to have, LOTS of people have a lot of hair for lots of reasons, medical, hereditary etc. But to call them ugly is wrong.
A sort of confusing story but very well written. I'm intrigued and want to read more of this