All Comments on 'I Know Her'

by FiveWolves

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FiveWolvesFiveWolvesover 10 years agoAuthor
Typos

Sorry, all. I missed several typos. Already loaded a corrected version.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Finish what you start

I mean this story and MORE importantly "Redemption"... This is a compliment, I loved both starts.

LesbianChickLitLesbianChickLitover 10 years ago
I Concur

I definitely want more of both.

FiveWolvesFiveWolvesover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks - I'm working on it!

Thanks for the nudging! You all rock! I'm working on Redemption Ch 2. This was a stand alone, though I'm working on writing this from the angle of the other person.

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 10 years ago
Finish What You Start?

While I would enjoy reading more about these two, I don't think it cries out for a continuation. It stands quite well on its own.

KarenEKarenEabout 10 years ago
Agree With Sbrooks

Continuation would be nice, but not really necessary.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Hi FiveWolves, I feel like I read the 3 page, of a 5 page story!

Your story "I Know Her". Has no beginning and no ending! Now unless I'm reading the story out of sequence?

Gay Kat.

FiveWolvesFiveWolvesalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Gay Kat

You're right - thus one had no beginning and no end. It was just a moment in their lives, informed by other moments. A vignette rather than a story.

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