by FiveWolves
Sorry, all. I missed several typos. Already loaded a corrected version.
I mean this story and MORE importantly "Redemption"... This is a compliment, I loved both starts.
Thanks for the nudging! You all rock! I'm working on Redemption Ch 2. This was a stand alone, though I'm working on writing this from the angle of the other person.
While I would enjoy reading more about these two, I don't think it cries out for a continuation. It stands quite well on its own.
Your story "I Know Her". Has no beginning and no ending! Now unless I'm reading the story out of sequence?
Gay Kat.
You're right - thus one had no beginning and no end. It was just a moment in their lives, informed by other moments. A vignette rather than a story.