All Comments on 'Erotic Witness'

I like it. Nice pace through the masturbation scene. And a nice emotional feel to the story in addition to being arousing. My only question is do you Aussies really use "lent" as the past tense of lean?

Hey thanks for your comment. I really appreciate it. My story was meant to be erotic (which I hope people find it as such) and not necessarily a sex story.

As for how I used the word lent, it's really my fault. I should have used leaned but its something I've done all my life. It's one of those things that I know what word to use and I know the word lent used in that context is wrong, but at the time of writing I forget that.

Sorry about that.

There are so many errors, both in punctuation and capitalization, that it made it hard for me to read this.

I like your main characters and I'm primed to move forward... Get to writing will ya.