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rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
proof reader please

preferably one who speaks English as a primary language.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
which is it? first? or third?

Friends & Family Ch. 03

by kingswede©

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This is the first on many chapters of me growing up in the Midwest in the late spring and early summer of 1971 before moving to AZ to live with my grandmother and attend college.

EroticWriter0826EroticWriter0826over 9 years ago
Proof Reader

Dude...you REALLY need a proof reader.

...to gaze a pond....??? Really? You're looking at a small body of water?

chytownchytownover 7 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

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Enjoy reading a good story and having a cold beer while doing just that or what ever the "BOSS"of 52 years suggests we do as she stand naked in front of me swinging her 42" F ; for me to play with. (she is a little topheavy as her waist is only 33" with 37"hips)

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