All Comments on 'All Day Foreplay'

by Oldbear63

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
My hand between her legs ----i can feel , almost taste , her wetness :

Sexeeeee , Oldbear !!!

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
IS THE THINKING AND THE ANTICIPATION

that much better the the Act. TK U MLJ LV NV

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Very erotic.

Do so many women really gush when they cum? Lit makes it seem like they all do. Suppose I only have an n of 1 but that hasn't been my experience.

alecxavieredmondalecxavieredmondover 10 years ago
Well paced

As technically adept as it was playfully sensual. It's poetry, why shouldn't a woman have a better orgasm than in real life?

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the kind comments

Alec, Lesse - of the women I have known (wow that feels cool and worldly to write) Okay, of both women I have known, the gushing (is it "squirting?") occurs very rarely with one and much more frequently with the other. I love it.

Taz - anticipation is a wonderful thing, but it's only anticipation...

Ashesh - the smell and the taste, likely the closest thing I have to a fetish

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
Love it!

Both your poem and the reality of all day build up. Putting this in my favorites to remind me to do it more often.

willieb153willieb153almost 10 years ago
Hot and steamy!

Hello Old bear,good job here.It's always a fun time in the sack when you have a chick that likes what you like.Hot stuff ! 2 thumbs up,my friend. Check out "THE HOOK UP".

Take care,Have a nice day.

willieb153

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