All Comments on 'Keeping Secrets'

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thebuffalothebuffaloover 10 years ago

Outstanding! Enjoyed this one a great deal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
only a brother can truely show real love to your wife

There aren't enough of these stories. It would be better if it were real!!!!

write_or_wrongwrite_or_wrongover 10 years ago
Another Chapter - PLEASE?

Can't wait to read about Saturday. And Sunday, and ...

Keep 'em cumming, er, coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Loved it!

Can't understand why the narrator is still so reserved after what must have been the best erotic experience of his life, but perhaps it all will be resoved in future episodes.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Not

Not a homophobe, but I don't like reading about them. Cucks and whore's like these people either.

Pak130Pak130about 1 year ago

A shame there wasn't a part 2. This was quite fun with all the parts involved loving and respecting each other.

StubbyoneStubbyone9 months ago

Really good writing, however the character Jeff, being a man, at his age 19 or 20, would never have thought twice about sharing his sexy sister in law. Guys, at that age are pounding their pud at least twice a day, if not more often. A 19 year old thinks with their dick a lot more than with their brain. Part -2 is waiting to be born !

Worth a 5-😊😊😊😊😊 Good job.

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