by markindy
There aren't enough of these stories. It would be better if it were real!!!!
Can't wait to read about Saturday. And Sunday, and ...
Keep 'em cumming, er, coming.
Can't understand why the narrator is still so reserved after what must have been the best erotic experience of his life, but perhaps it all will be resoved in future episodes.
Not a homophobe, but I don't like reading about them. Cucks and whore's like these people either.
A shame there wasn't a part 2. This was quite fun with all the parts involved loving and respecting each other.
Really good writing, however the character Jeff, being a man, at his age 19 or 20, would never have thought twice about sharing his sexy sister in law. Guys, at that age are pounding their pud at least twice a day, if not more often. A 19 year old thinks with their dick a lot more than with their brain. Part -2 is waiting to be born !
Worth a 5-😊😊😊😊😊 Good job.