All Comments on 'After Hours'

A beautifully written and intensely erotic story. The small talk at the end is perfect. Outstanding work.

I really liked it. Short and hot and sweet. Thank you!

I really liked the way you wrote this story!

I loved this story. It contains all the elements of a fantastic write. The passion, anticipation and the feral emotions of wanting to fulfill all the desires of hearts that beat in synchronicity. Your approach is unique and the result is outstanding!

The compassion and intamacy between these two was lovely. Great story.

A wonderful erotic piece, thank you.

you haven't lost your touch

Beautifully written.

The only gripe I've ever had with any of your stories is how long I have to wait between stories.

It wasbthe first BDSM story that I really liked. The imagery was such that I could feel every touch.

A well written journey of a submissive. The thoughts are very concise yet give the perfect apex of thought; over emotion; over thought. The only negative is that it is so short. I want more!!

This is how it should be with another. There's passion, intensity, caring, as well as raw sexual release. This will be a favorite of mine,as well as the author.

I'm really glad that I found you. Your writing skills are amazing. For me, you have the perfect amount of detail and sophistication. Some writers go to extremes. Their verbiage is so unrealistic that it loses realism. Yours is perfect! Not too much detail, but enough to create a vivid picture for us lucky readers. Thanks again.