All Comments on 'Hiliad's Special Gift Ch. 04'

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Hmmm

Loving the slow burn to this.

Whoever knew vampires could be such gentlemen lol

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedover 10 years ago

I also love this and im really curious as to y daniel let her go if he loves her. Does hiliad know and just wont tell her .please hurry wth more i love this

spearishspearishover 10 years ago
Letting it slip slightly

Dont be pressured to turf out chapters or the quality will slip .She's used the word "slave" a couple of times when she is in fact a sub and they are not interchangeable.Also Hiliad didn't "bring her there " she sought him out .

It seems silly that when she has no money she wouldn't retrieve her things from Daniel . Still would like to see Daniel come back in to the picture but enjoying it so far .

FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago
Sorry, Masterfuljim

Not gentlemen. Still douchebags.

A2W-I am enjoying the story, my gnashing teeth aside. They guys are just colossal jerks.

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