All Comments on 'Lady in Red Ch. 30'

by Harddaysknight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Another great chapter. It is a testament to your skill as a writer that you have been able to sustain this story for 30 chapters.

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 10 years ago
Thanks for another great step in the adventure....

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
this your masterpiece

great writing.

ace4869ace4869over 10 years ago
And again

HDK hits one outta the park.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I'm so glad...

... that I found this series again. I read about the first half, then lost track until I stumbled on it again.

Great series. (Even if a bit unbelevable)

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
Been waiting and waiting!

Thanks for another great chapter

bruce22bruce22about 10 years ago
Longtime between chapters

This is an interesting fantasy. What really would happen if Superman decided to try and live among us???

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story so far!

After reading 30 chapters ... it's a really great story! I hope the rest will be just as good.

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
another entertaining chapter

thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
How come

How come Kate would be sharing a bed with her parents because of the room switch?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Anon 10/21/19 - Dad Ted just showed up with Uncle Will. Kate had been sharing her moms bed and since dad was there now, it would be awkward to share her mom and dads bed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fort Pierce

My town

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yet

Yet another cock up.How does a one armed waitress write down an order?.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
One of your commenters is a dick

Just saying.. instead of enjoying a well written story he/she nitpicks. I’ve had a one armed waitress before.. most of them just remember the order and relay it but there’s no reason to even worry about it since she wasn’t a real waitress to begin with... ffs. Enjoying the story and thanks for sharing

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

Sheer madness at times. Can hardly keep track on all the female characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Reading it for the second time, enjoying as much if not more this time around... anyone who can't get their heads round poetic licence and wild imagination shouldn't be reading this (Hdk warned you it would be crazy)... in my opinion Lady in Red is one of two must read escapism tales on this site (the other being Eye in Sky) 5 stars all day long. Tony Barnes, Nottingham UK

minnygopherminnygopher11 months ago

I know pretty well the area where our intrepid (and indestructible) hero and his merry band of heart-stoppingly stunning ladies are galivanting around in this current installment of LiR.

My now wife and I met and were married in Palm Beach Gardens, and lived in Jupiter, Florida, for a number of years. In fact, we spent our wedding night and a couple of days/nights in a suite on the top floor of a hotel on Hutchinson Island. We loved visiting the beaches and restaurants along US1 and A1A in Stuart, Jensen Beach, Ft Pierce, etc. The United States Navy SEAL Museum is really neat!

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