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by redpassion

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
5

for the difference

5 for daring to write it

not your standard fare

I would be more specific, but then a would really really have to read it

While it does have its humour it, it would benefit from a little more indirectness, possibly a little less generalization

just my take

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
this one...

Didn't really do it for me. Feels like too much of a stretch, maybe it's the language that's off?

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