All Comments on 'Self Portrait'

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
My arse is like a breeze

It sways 'n moves

It ......

.... Craves Pleasure 'n Pain !

Thank you Storm with this verse you made this Bottom lover's day !! 5-ed . Should it be 5 Stars , 5 Spanks or 5 Appreciative Pats ?!?

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
I see you beautifully, Storm

and I see you are beautiful. I loved every stanza.

Lexiloo571Lexiloo571over 3 years ago

I see you and I hear and I'm here

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