by petofkeon
One of my pet niggles is the constant use of the capital H in His and Him.
We know from the story that he is the dominant, so please don't think we haven't noticed.!
Other than that, a short sharp readable story....off to find me an elf !
I loved this. The twist at the end came as a complete surprise. Well done and thank you. 5 stars
I have read a ton of erotic stories and have never had the urge to comment...until today. This story was playful and extremely sexy all at once:) well done!
Why do BDSM stories always include sodomy? It's not necessary.
Otherwise a nice playful story