All Comments on 'The Christmas Job'

by petofkeon

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 10 years ago
Hi petofkeon

One of my pet niggles is the constant use of the capital H in His and Him.

We know from the story that he is the dominant, so please don't think we haven't noticed.!

Other than that, a short sharp readable story....off to find me an elf !

O_ThereYouAreO_ThereYouAreover 10 years ago
Great shortie with a nice surprise twist

I loved this. The twist at the end came as a complete surprise. Well done and thank you. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
noteworthy

I have read a ton of erotic stories and have never had the urge to comment...until today. This story was playful and extremely sexy all at once:) well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Why do BDSM stories always include sodomy? It's not necessary.

Otherwise a nice playful story

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