All Comments on 'Captive Princess Pt. 02'

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Phil_PatsfanPhil_Patsfanover 10 years ago
Very good so far

Just a a little too short. I guess there won't be any ransom or rescue.

MaynessMaynessover 10 years ago

Would have liked a longer chapter but am very interested to see where up you take this. Pretty horrific start for the slaves so far!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Superb story, but like the others, felt this chapter was a bit short. But if you leave the readers wanting more, you have written a good story- and you have done. Looking forward to reading more.

From_One_to_AnotherFrom_One_to_Anotherover 10 years ago
Very Good!!

Great story! I'm liking the plot so far. I thought the length of the chapter was just fine! Hope to hear more from you:)

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