All Comments on 'Holly's Jollies'

Mah fave story so far, seriously! Wellz done, homie! Hope there's a sequel if there ain't alreadyyy! Or sth likezzat!! 😉 ~

I hope we see a second part of the story to find out more of their adventures together

Holly and Marshall should get a room. Wait, Marshall already has a room--perhaps they could retire there while Marshall reads an erotic book out loud and they imitate the actions in the story.

Sunday nights at the bookstore are so much more interesting than watching the drivel on TV.

Good luck in the holidays contest.

Oh I like! I'm thinking there should be a next chapter....:)

Very well done. Love how the story is set up. And then the action that follows is very well done. Agree with the others here that there definitely needs to be a part 2.

You had me at Holly's black hair and pale complexion, but the thought of this happening as you described was erotically amazing. I thought it was very well written, and would love to read more.

You've been on holiday for way too long? Can I be your editor? You know where to find me :-)

Loved this story. Very sexy and glad to read that bubbles was listening in the whole time. Continue with bubbles getting to watch them NEXT TIME

Very well paced. I loved the reality of the characters, how things moved forward at just the right speed and how everything stayed fresh and surprising, yet still fit.

Great twist ending as well.

What a great story. Very real characters and action. Loved it.

Very nice, Kimbalee. Quite a delicious scenario.