by ms_girl23
The level of detail really makes the poem, and the ending is powerful. I especially liked these lines:
Little fragments of beauty
Destroyed and broken
Left to gather dust
Just beautiful.
Sadly demonstrates how the most beautiful and joyful things can't always be preserved, and that often, they fade away and lose their vitality.
To avoid feeling pain
Avoid feeling love
In fact feel nothing at all
That's the life of the living dead.
A life time of dreams ~ abandoned like the petals from a faded rose ~ living only now in memory's garden.
A broken heart can make for wonderful prose but I hope to hear some joy from you soon.
or used as a put down. but should try to be positive. tk u mlj lv nv