All Comments on 'A Rose'

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AngelineAngelinealmost 20 years ago
This is lovely!

The level of detail really makes the poem, and the ending is powerful. I especially liked these lines:

Little fragments of beauty

Destroyed and broken

Left to gather dust

Just beautiful.

Honey123Honey123over 19 years ago
nice

Very deep...and truly lovely!

longcatlongcatover 19 years ago
really lovely, and bitter

and so it is finely balanced,

x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
love and time

A precis on the ravages of time, and how love flees.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
absolute shite

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Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Moving

Sadly demonstrates how the most beautiful and joyful things can't always be preserved, and that often, they fade away and lose their vitality.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

To avoid feeling pain

Avoid feeling love

In fact feel nothing at all

That's the life of the living dead.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
fallen

A life time of dreams ~ abandoned like the petals from a faded rose ~ living only now in memory's garden.

arghjacarghjacover 15 years ago
If this is your heart I hope to see some joy soon

A broken heart can make for wonderful prose but I hope to hear some joy from you soon.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
POETRY CAN BE SARCASM

or used as a put down. but should try to be positive. tk u mlj lv nv

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